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Aishowe literki ułożone w zdania

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Re: Aishowe literki ułożone w zdania

Post autor: Aishikami » 10 listopada 2018, 22:34

Kompot: Spokojnie, nie zrobiłabym tego. A co do tatusia, to w sezonie 5 była podobna scena, która pięknie oddała tę relację ;)
Erica had a list when she was younger. The list included the worst moments of her life, all at the courtesy of her epilepsy. The list was long, with the movie of her peeing herself during seizures circulating around school on top of it. When Derek bit her, she expected the list to cease to exist, she wanted to symbolically burn it. But then she realized that Derek was lost, that he was in no way the alpha he posed to be before he bit her. That whatever he promised her that day was more or less bullshit. When he bit Boyd, it got a little better, but they felt lonely, even together, like children abandoned by their parent. Then there was the violence. Derek claimed that he was teaching them control, that he need to make sure they were ready for their first full moon. She accepted it, after all, the alpha was a born wolf, he sure knew a lot about being a werewolf. It was only after she saw how Stiles helped Scott. How much better grounded Scott was for that. And she realized once again with panic that Derek absolutely knew nothing about being a bitten wolf and even less about being an alpha.
Thus, she did not throw the list away and only added to it.
*Nie mam własnej kultury, więc jem jogurt, aby mieć chociaż kulturę bakterii.*

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Post autor: Coffee » 10 listopada 2018, 22:40

A tak, ból odkrywania, jak głęboko pod ziemią się zakopało poprzeczkę xD
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Post autor: Kruffachi » 10 listopada 2018, 22:41

Szalenie mi się podoba sposób, w jaki interpretujesz Erikę, jest mocny, sensowny i bardzo ciekawy <3 To będzie przyjemność o niej czytać <3
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Post autor: Aishikami » 11 listopada 2018, 13:52

Sdzisiaj ;) XD
There was pain and then there wasn't. In its place there was nothing. Darkness, filled with silence. And dread. Stiles felt trapped in it. In this place void of warmth, of any comfort. Logically, he knew, he was just trapped in his head. But, he was not thinking logically. He was feeling. He felt lost. Then he heard voices. One was comforting, speaking of safety, breaking through the cold around him. But the other, the other made him cower in fear. It was speaking to him on a primal level. That was the predator to his pray. That voice spoke of deep wounds and pain. That voice carried the notes of betrayal and all-encompassing paralyzing fear. 
The voices pulled and pushed at him. Drew him near and made him want to run further into the recesses of his mind.
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Post autor: Coffee » 11 listopada 2018, 14:42

Ooostry trip *___* Lubię.
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Post autor: Kruffachi » 11 listopada 2018, 18:48

Och, Ty zły ludziu! <3 Uwielbiam cały ten koncept. Biedny, biedny Mietek...
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Post autor: nuklearna_wiosna » 11 listopada 2018, 20:29

Nie znam zupełnie oryginału, ale wcale nie muszę, żeby mieć ciarki <3
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Post autor: Aishikami » 12 listopada 2018, 20:26

Fajka na gorąco XD
Whatever this was, it was far from over. Like a physical pull, she felt the need to be close to Stiles, to sniff the air around him for the traces of the darkness that rubbed on him, look into his eyes to see what hid in the dark corners of his mind, crawl into that brain of his and dig, dig deep. Find the wrong, make it right, fix them all. The pack was broken, it needed her. She could glue it back together, if she could pull back up the one person that made them strong. So she was chasing shadows in her head, getting to know them, recognizing their particular brand of wrong. Knowledge was power, despite people trying to belittle that saying. Knowing the enemy was half the success. Knowing how to defeat the enemy was another quarter of it. Going into a battle blind could kill the strongest of soldiers. 

And they were no longer strong. Not as the blood of their own was still staining their hands and their hearts. Not when they were all lost in their heads. They could only see their pain. They did not think about the hand behind it. They were like puppets aware that they are tied to strings but too focused on what they were made to do, to spare a thought to the person pulling them around.
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Post autor: Kruffachi » 12 listopada 2018, 23:18

Jeżyku, jaki Ci tu klimat wychodzi <3 <3 <3 Za to lubię supernaturalne teksty, że nigdy do końca nie wiadomo, co jest metaforą, a co niekoniecznie
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Post autor: Coffee » 13 listopada 2018, 09:30

Pelna zgoda, klimat i w ogole opisy masz w tym ficku na szostke z gwiazdka i korona *__*
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Post autor: Aishikami » 13 listopada 2018, 21:52

:bag: *dyg* rumienię się aż ;)

A to wywalczone z dzisiaj, W KOŃCU.
Maybe Stiles reminded him of someone he lost to the flames, or made a non-existent protective spark wake up. Whatever it was, now Peter was pale, stricken, and carefully trying to redirect his nephew's suffering to safer tracks. 
"Time is of the essence here, Peter. I...," she faltered slightly at the sound of a particularly wet sob. "I understand but the tracks are getting cold, might have gotten cold already. This, this is something more. Something much more."
Peter seemed to consider her for a moment, his head was cocked to the side and he seemed to be scenting the air around her. Seconds ticked away, to the sound of an old clock hanging on her left. Her heart seemed to try and sync with it. 
"There is something off about your smell." 
He did not sound threatening, it was a matter of fact statement with a hint of curiosity that sparked her own.
"There are voices in my head that are not my own. Like the one that made me scream his name." She did not need to add whose name she meant. 
Peter took a cautious step toward her as if he was trying not to spook her. But he did not have to worry about that. There were many things she felt around Peter now, but fear was not one of them. 
"Then you, my dear, might be our best lead."
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Re: Aishowe literki ułożone w zdania

Post autor: Kruffachi » 13 listopada 2018, 22:08

Instynkty ojcowskie w Peterze :3 :3 :3 No, jestem ciekawa...
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